Zero Escape Dilemma Real Time Fandub
Jinx for Carlos
Carlos is a young firefighter who is one of the three primary protagonists. He is the leader of Team C in the Decision Game, which will consist of Junpei and Akane. Carlos is an honorable young man who claims he joined the Mars Mission Test Site experiment to help save someone very close to him: his sister Maria. He is generally kind and considerate, hot-blooded and has a strong sense of justice. He doesn’t know a whole lot about romance, but his co-workers confide to him about their romantic stories.
I made a promise in another history that I'd definitely save you two...
I was thinking about you, Akane. You're uh, well, to be blunt, really hot.
You heard me. Shoot me. Don't worry... I won't die. Even if this body is destoryed, my conscience will be---
Hi again Jinx! So same thing as your audition for Eric, your plosives come in very strong, so just need to work on mic technique. Besides that, though, my feedback for Carlos and this is probably something I will post an update on. But take your time with the lines and play with them a little bit. Lines 1 and 2 sound relatively rushed as if you are in a hurry; but with these lines don't need to be rushed and can be played around. Especially with line 2. Line 3 should be more aggressive; you have someone pointing a gun at you and you don't think they will pull the trigger so in a way you're intimating them especially now the character knows that they technically can't die.
Hope this helped out! Thanks again for audition!