Cheesy Angels
Randy Gilson for Kellen
About 21 lines, all pretty short. Audacity needed. A sarcastic and snarky nerd who is also a bumbling idiot.
- english
- male young adult
- audacity
Does NOBODY read the calendar emails I send?!
Oh, look at you, Ezraan… I didn’t realize it was treasure hunting amature hour… You should watch how a pro does it and take notes. I mean you certainly won’t find me falling for any traps like that because I’m extremely aware of my surroundings…
Hm, I’m sure that’s not suspicious at all. YO ANGELO, CHEESE ME UP, DAWG! (Note: The first part of the line shouldn't sound sarcastic.)
okay, this is pretty good. i feel like you should probably slow down a bit though, there's no need to rush through the lines. kellen is meant to be a lowkey cocky guy. that second line in particular where he's taunting Ezraan is meant to be more drawn out as he's walking right into an extremely obvious trap. other than that, i do really like your energy and think your voice is a good fit, the delivery just needs some work! :D
is he like, watching him go first and just mocking what hes doing sorta? like, oh look at this idiot type of judgmental attitude?
yes, exactly! and the whole reason the line is so funny is because he's doing exactly the same thing as Ezraan lmao. Kellen as a character also just teases Ezraan a lot in general because they're such close friends. its a loving kind of taunt
Ohhhhhh I see. That's whats up! I feel like that like is hard to really nail without context, but I get the jist :)