Cheesy Angels
Dylan Wayne Lawrence for Kellen
About 21 lines, all pretty short. Audacity needed. A sarcastic and snarky nerd who is also a bumbling idiot.
- english
- male young adult
- audacity
Does NOBODY read the calendar emails I send?!
Oh, look at you, Ezraan… I didn’t realize it was treasure hunting amature hour… You should watch how a pro does it and take notes. I mean you certainly won’t find me falling for any traps like that because I’m extremely aware of my surroundings…
Hm, I’m sure that’s not suspicious at all. YO ANGELO, CHEESE ME UP, DAWG! (Note: The first part of the line shouldn't sound sarcastic.)
I would like to congratulate you for being the first person to realize that he's meant to trail off in the second line, thank you for paying such close attention! I quite like your energy and think you're a good contender for the role. Any chance you could try speaking in a bit of a lower register? I think it sounds pretty good so far, but there's something that's putting me off and I'm not entirely sure what it is yet.
Thank you for the kind words and constructive feedback - I'm more than happy to submit another take of each line in a lower register, while keeping the energy at the same level.