Tales From The Gameverse! (A very small youtube project)
Rini_Angel for Shirley Faraday (Young Professor Codex)
The younger self of "Professor Codex" in our production (here's the actress for her adult self, for reference https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WCLnxYWFbj8).
[Inquisitive]: "Does that stuff really work like that, Papa? That's so cool! Will you teach me? I'd love to learn all about ::cutely attempting to pronounce a word here:: ami...neme...a-amin-o ac-ids!
[Disappointed, feeling a sense of neglect that is unfamiliar to her]: "Papa? Why won't...why won't Mama look at me, lately? She's in her room most times...she doesn't come out much. Sometimes I hear some stuff when I walk by...I think it's her. She sounds sad sometimes, Papa. I think she's missin something, but I can't tell what...I know I'm missin' her, though. The old Mama.
Good attempt, I really appreciate it. You ALMOST have the feel I imagined down, if maybe a pitch higher. Unfortunately, your mic quality is about the main thing holding this back for me :c. It would definitely contrast with a few others in the production. But again, thank you for trying!
Thank you for the input! May I try again, but use something else to record? Maybe the quality would be better.^^ I can also make my voice higher pitched in the new submission.
Ya know what, go for it, if you've got the time. Also, I didn't word my previous critique correctly. What I meant was your voice was a tad higher pitched than I envisioned for the character, so keep that in mind if you try again!