WDT - Vinland Saga - Manga Dub
allen the ultimate gamer for Thorfinn
A young warrior from the country of Iceland, Thorfinn finds himself under the employ of Askeladd and his raiders for the sake of bloody retribution for his father at the hands of Askeladd. Though he ultimately became an underling to Askeladd, Thorfinn understands that patience and time would eventually gain him a rightful opportunity to take Askeladd's life. Being smaller than most, Thorfinn serves as a scout and an assassin to Askeladd's group, and uses his two broad-knives to brutal efficiency.
(To the Franks - Ominous) So you won't accept our offer? Because Askeladd will take his hundred men right to the defenders.
(To the Norse - Threatening) Who asked for that sh!t? You know damn well what I want.
(To Askeladd - Furious Resolution) I, Thorfinn, son of Thors, warrior of Iceland, upon my father's blade, do seek a duel with Askeladd.
You're selling yourself way too hard here, as there's quite a bit of emotional exertion throughout your lines that feels excessive. Your pitch is actually fine for Thorfinn, as it fits his young age yet the tone you're setting sounds more immature than the actual age. Your delivery is not bad, as the speed of your lines are fine, but there's an issue with cadence in your voice that puts much more emphasis in particular portions than necessary.