"Evermore" [A full length 3D animated series]
Eno-spi for Jaune Craddock
[Amused as he finds the claim ridiculous.]
1)"Similar? Us? We're both street rats, 'bout all the similarities we have. Example, I don't go walking around scowling at everyone."
[Irritated and a little disgusted.]
2)"You use that word, Malignant, like being one robs a person of their humanity. Is that really how you see people? Hell, you're a Malignant...is that how you see yourself?"[Should have a somber tone, like he's reminiscing while also being a little silly.]
"You know, when I first met you, I thought...this chick is in desperate need of a vacation. I still think that but it's not the point. Point is: I understand 'why' now. I understand why no matter how many times or how hard life knocks you on your ass, you always come back swinging. That kid really is something special, has this way of making you forget about all the...unfair shit in the world. I get why you would go so far to protect that. Just remember: That little girl isn't going to want a future where you're not there beside her."[Should sound distracted at first, as you near the end of the line his words become more direct and focused.]
"~And to answer your question...the reason I can run dick first into this manmade hell is because I have someone worth fighting for, someone that deserves a tomorrow. Certainly more than most do. You really just can't help but to love the girl...and 'love' makes us do crazy things...and yeah, this? This is crazy."
Enjoyed the audition. There was some sort of technical issue or an odd background noise with the recording, not entirely sure. As for the lines, slow down a little. Your pacing felt rushed, remember, you're having a conversation with someone. The more relaxed your pacing is, the more natural you'll come across. I believe this could be fixed with pacing, but because of the quick deliveries of the lines, you didn't allow yourself time to convey emotion. Take it easy and just live in the moment.