Any feedback is greatly appreciated, general even! Edit: I also have a better condenser mic and pro tools to do another take/do final recordings with. I had to make do with today.
Good delivery, and I can imagine you playing a fairly sinister character. There is a small bit of a hiss in your recording, and wonder if you're using a USB mike, or powered microphone. (My take isn't perfect, so please don't think that I'm being rude.)
Thank you! I like to try to "think" like the character, give pauses as if he is thinking how he should say something. And yes, for my audition today I only had a Zoom H2n recorder and usb cable. I think its having a grounding issue. I have an available recording studio with condenser mics and pro tools I can do actual recordings with. I probably should have mentioned that in my intial posting. Also, I heard your audition as well, and I think you have a nice clean voice, which is great for narration!