"Evermore" [A full length 3D animated series]
Kenkoy for Carla Jae [CJ]
Carla Jae is much more open with her sister and loves her dearly. Because of this, she'd be hesitant to deny/refuse her sister something. Throughout the line, it should sound as if you're searching for the right words to say as you carry on. Carla Jae absolutely wants to deny this unknown request of Nina's but in the nicest way possible. Which isn't Carla Jae's strong suit as she tends to be more sharp tongued and blunt.
[Sounds exhausted then slowly builds to a more emotional, almost pleading tone.]
"Nina, please...I do not have the energy for this. We've discussed this already, I'm not...you're not becoming THIS. Okay? I don't want this for you. You're my sweet baby sister with the big, bright smile and I can't...I won't lose that. I don't belong on a pedestal as a person, a malignant, and especially not as your big sister. Keep that reserved for someone else..."Throughout the line, it should sound like she's fighting the urge to yell. As if she's muffling her own emotions.
[An annoyed tone on the verge of yelling.]
"M.L.K. was just a man that preached pacifism while inciting violence. A shit example for the delusional image you carry of the Runaways. Way I see it...if they stand in the way of your desires, fuck 'em. You could give everything of yourself or take everything you can get your hands on and this world would still tell you to screw off."*Need efforts. Sounds that you would make when exerting force like when throwing or taking a punch. Try different intensities and finish up with a frustrated, sorrowful cry/crying. Does not have to be in one take.
Here's take 2 of my audition for CJ with better quality, I hope you like it and please let me know if my audio quality has improved since my first audition and if there's any issues with quality I'd like to know how to fix it!
Sounds good! Really enjoyed your take here. If I were to critique anything, in the first line, remember that you're speaking to your baby sister. This is most likely an issue with how I described the line as I'm hearing a lot of people do this. In the line, it sounds like you're yelling at Nina, which is fine at the beginning if you ease it out. CJ is exhausted, so she might come off as annoyed at first but quickly realize who she's speaking to and soften her tone so she doesn't scare her sister. That or soften the tone entirely during that line. You could treat it as if she doesn't have the energy to get all up in arms on the issue they're discussing, maybe go so far as to sound as if CJ is nodding off at the end of the line. The other lines were great in delivery and pacing, though. Great job!