DragonFate - Visual Novel
morrow white for Jasper
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Voice Type: Resonant/Full, Bass/Baritone (mid-mid low), late 20s-30s
Character: Stern, mature, serious, soft-toned in certain situations
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“You shouldn't refuse help
when you need it, Onyx. You're almost a woman. You should act like
one.” (Stern and a little short, but not cruel)<!--
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“It is not safe here. We
need to reach the meeting point.” (Commanding, as if calling it
over his shoulder.)
Could i have feedback please?
Sure these are the main things I recommend working on: 1. Recording quality is letting you down quite a lot. 2. Your pronunciation on some words sounds a little strange. 3. The emotion behind the delivery is a bit of a roller coster. Try to relax a little when you record. Practice some scripts where you're just chatting to a friend and focus on making sure pronunciation is correct and that you sound like you're having a conversation, not giving a speech. Keep at it! :)
Thanks for the feedback. Ill get it better next time!