thank you, lizzie! i'll take note of that! <3 i'm still new to this so I'm figuring out what make good and bad takes as well!

I'd disagree in part with this, Lizzie here has an excellent voice and solid acting so only needs one take to show her skill, but for us who are still learning 'our' voice it's okay to repeat a line a couple of times however to make that worth your time (and the Casting Director's) try to vary each line maybe through pitch, accent, emphasis or tempo. This is not an easy thing and does take practice. Lizzie is still right to say you should limit it though I'd say 3 max but make them count. I'd probably watch your editing more so as the quality seems to alter throughout, try to keep the audition consistent but do not edit more than you need/can as when you land a role you'll want to put in a consistent recording each time.