I'm glad you pointed out the quality at the start, I was like "Whaaaat happened?!" because it was all clean the first time! I want to say that there is distinct improvement, especially in the emotion department. I can hear the effort being made, and that is awesome! Just keep working on it, and it will become unstoppable! My biggest advice from here is to be mindful of your clarity and speed. Some of your words kinda mesh together some, and some is lost in the speed. Just try to slow some of it down while speaking, and over annunciate the words. This takes a lot of practice, because if you put too much brain power into it, you will lose the new emotion you put into it. So, just keep practicing! I hope this helps, and great job!