Don't worry about it. That actually works for both the character and the line. You definitely have the right idea with this and I am really liking what you are giving me. Your voice is great. The quality sounds great. You really nailed the second line in your read. Now for the third line, you got the emotion and intent right, but I'd like you to really dial it up. She's ecstatic, she's surprised, she just heard exactly what she wanted to hear despite it being something she thought she would never hear. For the first line, you're on the right track but I would like you to really amp up the stress in her voice. She is on the verge of tears and just breaking down into a crying catatonic mess and the only thing keeping her resolve together is Marsha in the other room. You can feel free to re-upload/re-audition if you want but if you can't or don't have the time, I completely understand. No pressure.