I only have a couple small things as far as feedback for your audition. First off, I really appreciate that every take you had was conveyed a different way. It gives you and I more options as far as delivery. I think your overall ability to show emotion is pretty good. I do think you could do better with line 1, not necessarily because it was lacking, but because your 2nd line outshined it! I think with more practice fine tuning your emotions, you're going to be a big deal! But, aside from that, the other issue is quality. I think your quality gets a little shaky when you raise your voice, but it's not as noticable on the quieter lines. If there is a way you could enhance your recording space, that issue will work itself out on its own. I hope this helps!