Hoooo boy this is a tough one. I have very small feedback, because your audition was pretty darn solid. I had to listen numerous times to even construct the smallest feedback I can. That said, the irony of the feedback is that.. well, you're so good, that I don't think you took enough chances on it. My only example would be Line 2, CANYON CANNON! You spoke it perfectly, and I think you're capable of blowing me away. When doing lines for attacks of sorts, I like to do/hear two versions. A quick version, like you did, and a long draw out version like some climactic final attack. CAAAAANYOOOOOOON CANNOOOOON! Though perhaps that won't be how it even turns out in the show, your voice is so well honed, and your audition so solid, you're in a position to challenge yourself and knock some socks off. However, one could easily say the opposite, after all "less is more". So, utlize the feedback however you see fit, because in my eyes, you're already a success story. Thank you for taking an interest in the project!