Passage of the Wanderer: A Firnuvan Tale
theoverlordbear for Frasell
Somewhere between a forest ranger and an assets protection officer, Frasell is a mercenary hired by Nimekal Smelting to keep people from carving the metal off the trees in Nimekal Woods and selling it off on the black market. He is a cynical individual who was promised a fantastical adventurous life when he was younger and was instead delivered repetitive routine after he finished his education. He finds The Wanderer and Lumiya in Nimekal Woods and after guiding them to Eclipse out of guilt, comes to join their cause hoping to find the adventure he’d always sought as a child. He is of the Kafad {Dryad} race, beings composed of wood, magic and natural energy and said to be the closest in touch to the realm of Braia; they are distant relatives of the tree-like Feur’vrunn. {Ent}
“I really fail to see how this is heroic in any sort of way. Unless someone changed the definition of heroic to ‘one who engages in bumbling aimless antics on a frequent basis’”
“Hey! Off the iron grass!… I mean, it’s your funeral really. Rustworm is not a fun time, let me tell you.”
“Really, you should be considering this a favor. I keep you out of trouble and I’m educating you. I’m like a body guard and tour guide wrapped into one… so be grateful!”
Try to approach Frasell with a bit less direct anger and more smarmy arrogance. Your tone is very aggressive right now, when Frasell is far more a jaded young man with little to lose at this point.
In that case, I guess there should be more aloofness and tiredness along with that, then? Anyway, thank you very much for your feedback!