Watch out for those pronunciations of Nasturtium and Carotenoid Lutein. It’s okay to look up pronunciations of words before reading a script. Nasturtium and Carotenoid Lutein are pronounced like “nuh·stur·shm” and “kr·aa·tuh·noyd loo·teen” respectively.

This read feels a bit disconnected, as I’m not sure who you’re target audience is. Along with that, this read feels really consistent, I would like to see change ups in terms of pacing, emotion, and tempo. As this read somewhat gave the droning effect. 

I would like to see you explore a scene that you create, and allow yourself to really connect with the script, what does Mrs. Mary Nillimore mean to you, is she still here with us? Questions like this would help set the stage and allow you to make this read feel a bit more conversational. 

Keep practicing and keep going! Halfway through the course, you got this!