WDT - Guilty Gear XRD Rev 2 (Super Skill Showcase)
wungobongova for Sol Badguy
A bounty-hunter and ex-crusader that wanders the world in search of fortune and gears, magical bioweapons of which he was one of the first to be created. Having lived for over 100 years, Sol has had his share of battle and wishes to make up for the creation of gears through their suppression; as well as the power and weaponry to make that possible
Sol is not a friendly person, often speaking in an unrefined or even crass manner, and prefers to let his actions speak louder than his words. Yet, he carries a compassionate side to himself he shows towards the wronged or innocent. Though Sol is a person that speaks only when necessary, he ultimately carries a strong emotional center to counteract his otherwise bad attitude.
Voice: Low; Gruff, brash, forward in speaking, though not overtly loud or rude.
(Tyrant Rave) What a pain in the @ss. (Attack Connects) So stop WHINING!
(Dragon Install) You've p!ssed me off!
(Instant Kill - Branding Breach) Let's dial this up to 50%. (Attack Connects) Get ready! HRRUAAAHH! (Attack Finishes) Really? Won't let me finish?
Pitch is low, as it should be, along with a gruff delivery throughout your lines. The tone could be improved though as I feel it may be, ironically, too aggressive for Sol's voice. Make his anger one more out of annoyance, rather than actual killing intent, as it's crossing over his gruff dialogue. The consistency in your audition is well warranted, as it there doesn't seem to be any character breaks in it. Small mistake during your final line, 50% is meant to be said 'fifty percent'.