A lovely read indeed Blackpurist. You did a great job of keeping a smile on your face through the read. That does so much to sell this scene where you're talking to a younger relative.

Right at the beginning, you sound a lot like you are reading and not performing the script. That comes from your speaking pattern repeating every sentence. Until you get to "I do remember that she was a great cook" every line was said in the exact same cadence. That cadence seems to be a natural pattern for you, as it happens a few more times in the read. Just be mindful that you don't fall into a habit of defaulting to the same pattern as you read through a script.

Good job on your pronunciation here, you hit the challenge words well. Just be careful to give yourself enough time to fully articulate the words in the script. There were a few sections of the script where you lost a little bit of clarity and the read became somewhat mumbled. We always want to maintain a high level of clarity in our deliveries.

Overall a very nice read! A pleasant and bubbly delivery, nice work Blackpurist!