Your inflection and cadence feels so warm! Listening to you reminisce is taking me back like I was there eating those macaroons! Good job

So, when I first played this, my headset had started messing up with extra noise. Your voice sounded like a recording of a robot. Made the script so much more menacing than it should have been lol

Hearing it normally though, I absolutely love how soft and light you were reading through this. Such a warm interaction with how you deliver it!!

A warm and friendly read here Zeph, nicely done. You have, as the other have pointed out, a great warmth to your read here that goes hand in hand with the script. I can hear the smile on your face through the delivery which is a great thing to do when going for this sweet and kind style of delivery! Pronunciation and articulation were just fine, I can hear the hoarseness in your voice a little but that did not detract all that much from the read.

Something that I really enjoyed was the laughter you had during certain spots in the script. That's a great way to really evoke that kind of happy memory delivery that you were going for. Were we to hit this again, I'd love to hear that same kind of joy and whimsy through some of the alliterations as well, almost like making it a game for the kids listening to the story.

Something I would also look at is digging more into the audience of the script. Who are these kids that we're reciting this story for? Is this a story time for a classroom, a family story during a party? What's our personal relationship to these kids and why do we want to tell them about Ms Nilimore? Is it the way she baked, the way she always made us feel better, the silly rhymes she always did? Building out the context of these details helps us build a richer delivery for our read and informs more about our acting choices we can make!

Overall a wonderful read Zeph, great work and looking forward to more!