Really fun energy!! You lose some of your projection in the more complicated areas (ex. Kilagub Gilded Dung Beetle), but I heard nice distinctions and emphasis on with the target sounds BDG. I'd buy what you're selling! hehe

Oh immediately I love the energy here. Captivating and quirky, a great combo for such a silly script. It also lent itself to the exaggerated articulation we were going for.

You did a splendid job most of the script hitting the articulations hard and giving us a nice and clear enunciation. The only hang ups were sometimes you picked up the pace in the read, and we lost that impeccable clarity. You were never slurred or unclear by any means but we did loose the pristine clarity during some of those fast running lines. A fun variety in the read speed, just be careful the clarity doesn't fall too far off when you do that! Looking at that "find us at" specifically. In a commercial read like this, we would want absolute clarity on something like the location of the client. Blowing by that quickly probably wouldn't be aright and the client would likely ask for a re-take so people can hear the full store name clearly.

A bubbly and fun read all told Variah! Great job, can't wait to hear more!