HW Review:

Oh man! You absolutely nailed the articulation! I think you may be one of the first I've heard that hit every single "T" without any of them sounding like a "D" instead. I can't find a single spot that might need polishing with your articulation. Fantastic job!

Nice work catching your flub right at the start, pausing, and starting over. This is the best way to handle a flub like that.

You have such a lovely tone that is very pleasant to listen to. Your performance and overall voice print fits this script very well. Your pacing is well managed and your breath control is steadily maintained throughout the script. You have a great grasp on the control of your speaking rhythm and breath placement.

Unrelated to the articulation, just as an extra tip:

Be mindful of your mouth clicks, as you make quite a few of them. These often occur when you open your mouth to speak or take breaths, or might occur with certain word formations. Mouth clicks can be reduced through making sure you are staying hydrated, swallowing, and by utilizing vocal warmups that loosen up the muscles around your mouth such as lip trills and tongue twisters.