Need a handful of people to review my Pilot script. I'm not with a studio or anything and I am in college, so the payment isn't high. This is a passion project of mine, and for this role I would like to receive grammatical corrections, opinions as someone with little to no knowledge on the story, and anything else that you think could make the script stronger. Not looking for someone to just read it and only respond with "Yeah, this is good" or "Could be more descriptive". Not necessary but let me know if you have any history working with writing or scripts.