This audition was a bit tricky for us. We liked the severity I your tone but its a little to much. remember that the character is still carefree and cocky. We liked your threatening tone but most of his lines are not in that fashion. If you would like to send another take to my discord its AnItalianWaffle#1728
So less menacing and severe, more official and detached? I can do that, was the voice pitch and tone alright?
The pitch and tone were good. Think of him like a friendly grandpa. We're eager to hear your audition