Passage of the Wanderer: A Firnuvan Tale
allisonthetalkinghamster for The Guiding Voice
A mysterious detached voice that is the embodiment of The Wanderer’s previous life. They explain the two of them were severed from one another by a great evil force and that when connected, they form one of the powerful Guardians of Firnuvos that have existed since the creator’s time. The Guiding Voice is kind and nurturing and provides wisdom and guidance to The Wanderer as they journey forth to combine the two of them back together. The Guiding Voice can only be heard and seen by The Wanderer due to their inherent connection as the same being.
“Patience my soul. You are in a very volatile state right now. We have been struck by a very powerful and wicked magic and it is likely to leave you shaken and poor in judgement. Just listen carefully to my words.”
“Guardians are of whatever form we so choose and we may choose new forms any time we wish. One of my closest friends enjoys swapping between a little girl and a fearsome black dragon, and another can’t ever seem to decide what they want. I do wonder what Viyide has gotten themselves up to these years,”
“Do not fear! I will protect you my soul. While I cannot manifest on a physical plane with you, I will bless you with my faith and belief. Let it empower you on your journey and keep you going in the bleakest of hours,”
You have a very excellent voice and presentation tone here, but largely the issue facing you in this audition is your own youthful tone. You talk very casually and relaxed here, when the Guiding Voice is the epitome of a needlessly formal tone. The attitude and personality is really great and very friendly; and combined with that formal approach could be a very good voice for the character.
I appreciate the feedback! May I audition a second time with a less relaxed tone? If you've listened to my take on Viyide, this is pretty formal by comparison, but I can do even more formal if that helps. :)
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