Passage of the Wanderer: A Firnuvan Tale
cinnamonivy for Dr. Cleria
The head scientist for the city of Eclipse and the person responsible for splitting The Wanderer from the Guiding Voice. Her motivations are largely a mystery though the Guiding Voice is of the belief that she is the secret leader of the Order of Flame having infiltrated Eclipse to steal their technology for the Order. Despite her position and power, her behavior is largely introverted and awkward, frequently stumbling over her words and embarrassing herself. She is someone who seems very used to having others do things for her rather than doing them herself as her own self-reliance is near absent. Her voice is hardly intimidating at all.
“Wh-wh-what are you doing here?! I thought I left you in Nimekal! You should’ve been intercepted by my agent hours ago! How did you even f-f-find me here?!”
“I-I-I don’t know what it is you’re trying to do exactly, but you should stop it now! I-I-I’m not afraid to get violent with you! I’ve got some powerful people behind me who’ll stop you!”
“I’m kind of annoyed, Roy. I have nearly the whole collection of figurines, but I’m just missing figure seven of the second set… Yeah, that’s the one with the suuuper cool pose. It’s like the best one out of set two save for the romantic one where they’re… Panobar’s Scales, is this thing on? OH GOD, HOW MUCH OF THAT DID YOU HEAR?! AAAAAAHHHH FORGET YOU HEARD ALL OF THAT!!! *click*”
Sorry, I completely butchered the pronunciation there.
Mispronunciations of the fantasy stuff will get fixed later. There's a whole guidebook for it all for largely that reason. Anyway, you seem to really have the nerdy part of Dr. Cleria down pat. You shine really well in the third line with embodying that awkwardness that defines her character. Try to put a little of that into the first two lines. Almost at one point during the second threatening to get violent and her suddenly realizing she actually has no way of actually doing so and altering her argument to rely on her connections instead, poorly trying to make it seem like that was her intention all along.