Passage of the Wanderer: A Firnuvan Tale
Tavian for Evem
The third of the Council of Seven. Evem is part of the Jezade {Shade} race, being comprised entirely out of shadows and capable of shaping himself in any sort of way he wants to. Evem out of all the council finds shame in his lack of a proper identity, being indistinguishable from any other Jezade at all, and is a rarity in finding himself awful and worthless. He wears a distinctive mask that warps and changes to his own mood and his minions all in turn wear masks that hide whatever facial features they may have, despite the fact almost all Jezades are capable of appearing however they want. Evem has a deep admiration for beauty and culture that can come across as obsessive at times.
“The curvature in your face is… exquisite. I could run my fingers along them for hours. I trust you won’t mind if I do do that? Of course not. You aren’t going anywhere obviously.”
“Have you noticed the way you hold your wrist when you’re concerned? It’s admirable. You have to stop yourself from fighting because you know you will if someone threatens your ‘friends’. I wish I felt things. Had reasons to fight,”
“You’re frightened of me. I can feel it in your breath. Is it uncomfortable to have your face so close to mine? Someone you don’t know, someone you don’t trust? Or is it really… That you’re afraid of the intimacy? The potential of someone being this deep into the space you call your own? Perhaps I could even see your thoughts if I focus hard enough.”
Much as your last audition, there's a degree of ambiance in your audio you should perhaps address, but I will not dwell on it as I've mentioned it before. With your audition, you curiosity is simply not intense enough. At best, you seem mildly interested in the things you've noticed, which is a fine start, but Evem is ultimately *obsessed*. It is all he can think about a great majority of the time, losing focus on everything else around him when he notices a fascinating tick or a subconscious observation. It really needs to border heavily into the realm of creepy and uncomfortable every time he starts talking at all.
I did also want to note, you have a potentially good voice for Jaquotix. You should definitely give him a try.