Passage of the Wanderer: A Firnuvan Tale
Heisenbern for The Guiding Voice
A mysterious detached voice that is the embodiment of The Wanderer’s previous life. They explain the two of them were severed from one another by a great evil force and that when connected, they form one of the powerful Guardians of Firnuvos that have existed since the creator’s time. The Guiding Voice is kind and nurturing and provides wisdom and guidance to The Wanderer as they journey forth to combine the two of them back together. The Guiding Voice can only be heard and seen by The Wanderer due to their inherent connection as the same being.
“Patience my soul. You are in a very volatile state right now. We have been struck by a very powerful and wicked magic and it is likely to leave you shaken and poor in judgement. Just listen carefully to my words.”
“Guardians are of whatever form we so choose and we may choose new forms any time we wish. One of my closest friends enjoys swapping between a little girl and a fearsome black dragon, and another can’t ever seem to decide what they want. I do wonder what Viyide has gotten themselves up to these years,”
“Do not fear! I will protect you my soul. While I cannot manifest on a physical plane with you, I will bless you with my faith and belief. Let it empower you on your journey and keep you going in the bleakest of hours,”
Great job! It would be my pleasure to extend you a Callback for the part of the Guiding Voice. You can find a bit more info on this in the recent update. In preparing for the additional material, try to go about sounding a little bit less stilted. The Guiding Voice is of that 'Celestial Being Who Can't Talk Like a Normal Person' variety of people, but it's not entirely as disjointed as your approach. Go just a bit more casual, but not too casual. And while it may sound a bit odd to recommend, practice being a bit... nefarious.
Will do!