Hey! Hope it's okay if I drop some feedback.

I love how bubbly your voice is - the tone variation feels both fun and intentional. If I had to give any feedback, I would've loved to see more variation in pacing, but with that said, you included that briefly in the middle anyway. I'm very impressed that you got through that whole read without stumbling too!

You do have a super bubbly voice, I enjoyed the little chuckles you through in too!

Wow a super fun read here. The others have nailed it on the head you have a wonderfully playful intonation through the read. It's a lot of fun to listen to and quite good for a cold read. There's a lot of fun spunk to the read that I really enjoy.

I love that I can hear your breathes, I love that I can tell your trying to project, I still want more. We're at like a full 5, I wanna get you to a 7. More air, like pushing a solid fully formed and dense punch of air straight into the audience! Fill that gym! Preach to the back row!

On the topic of your pauses and pacing, I loved that you took your time with the script. Even adding some character aspirations in there, again very fun. I will say mind ensuring your take will be able to flow just as well when you edit the pauses out later. For the most part you do a great job of pausing on breaks withing sentences or on punctuation marks but there were some moments within the run on sentences where a break for air cut up the energy of the read. Or a breath break that ran too close into or out of another word where it would be difficult to cut the breath without cutting off your read a little bit.

This is an excellent read. Comes off as someone who's comfortable in the booth and has done their fair share of auditions already. I'm catching the deliberate character choices made through the read and I'm loving the detail. So I'm gonna give you some more advanced feedback here. Watch the way you tackle long lists. We don't want to fall into a sort of rhythmic cadence that repeats with each comma. We want the energy of the read to continually climb, especially through these monotonous sections. Change up your pacing, choose new locations to add articulation/emphasis, change your tone even, we wanna keep the audience engaged through those long sections of commas. Speaking of energy, I'd love to see more of it conserved through the read. Like I mentioned we took some breath pauses that slashed our phrase and killed the momentum of the read. Be on the lookout for that, and don't be afraid of backing back up to the top of a phrase to hit the whole thing over again if the flow gets interrupted.

An exceptional and decidedly entertaining read. Great start to the class, looking forward to more!