Overall, this is an improvement! I really like the tone used especially in "once more?" I think that's the tone we'd go for in the delivery of lines 1 and 2. It's supposed to be this really sweet, quiet scene that is allowed to skew and take its time. Line 3 also will need a bit more of a quiet tone, but direction is key to getting the very best out of actors! I want more opportunities to direct! :D Really, this is quite better than take 1!
Voice Actor
Halastair is one of the characters we are introduced to in Willowveil's backstory. He is Alma's husband and is 32 years of age. A skilled archer, Halastair has been away to war for months. One dark, stormy night, he comes home finally after a gruesome battle alongside his comrades with a demon horde. However, he must return to his regiment after a two-week period.
Name: Halastair
Age: 32
Characteristics: Protective, Supportive, Grounded
Voice Inspirations: Andre Sogliuzzo (Hakoda from Avatar), Damien Haas (Kiyoka from My Happy Marriage), Ray Chase (Ruslan from Left Alive), Nolan North (Jason Fleming from Shadow Complex)
(Hushed/ Desolate/ Weary) “I thought I would lose sight of who I was; that my identity would become unknown to me. Yet… that was hardly the biggest concern I had. I was… worried… scared even… that I would forget everything about the woman I love… and every detail about her… my mate’s scent… her voice… her face.”
(Warm/ Loving/ Intimate) "Alma, if I may ask it of you. Will you please... be my songbird this night? I... wish to hear beautiful melodies come from your lips once again. I... also wish to bring you comfort as well. So, please... be my songbird... once more?"
(Considerate/ Fatherly/ Assured) "Jemina, my little featherling. I want you to look after your mother while I'm away. I understand how difficult this must be, but I must return to the men and do my very best to protect you both. I promise I will come home soon. Please... be a big girl and put on a brave face... for me?"
