HanaSato: Relationship Between Sorcerers
Amanda Reyes for Hana Yamamoto
Hana (Haa-nuh), Young Adult, Female, Satoru's... it's complicated!
A highly sensitive person. More than anything, Hana just wants a place to belong. Maybe that's why she's a sorcerer despite everything about her screaming that's a really bad idea! She is quite stubborn despite her sweet demeanor.
Soft-spoken, but has a habit of speaking louder or stumbling over her words when her emotions (good or bad!) are high. She wears her heart on her sleeve and doesn't bother hiding what she feels. Really, it's painfully obvious when she's upset...
- english
- female adult
- female young adult
- Soft-spoken
It’s just… people tend to drift apart when there’s no obligation keeping them together. (Despondent, worried)
What’s wrong? Did something happen? (Concerned)
Hold on , where are we going?! (Startled, being abruptly pulled along)
You captured Hana's energy pretty well; good range of volume without being too loud, unless the line called for it, and I like the emotion in each line! However, there were a few plosives that were hard for me to ignore. Thank you for the submission!
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