Aside from some pronunciation issues here and there (like on apothecaries in a few spots) and maybe if lines 1 and 2 were a bit giddier and more excited, I do like the more mature voice here for Rosie! I think we could direct and make it into something very strong. ^_^
Thank you the honest feedback, that really gives me a direction to improve! 😁 I could re-do if your interested? If your heading in a different direction with someone else, I totally understand!
Ahaa that would be awesome!!