Sean you nailed the cadence and timing on the provided lines... unfortunately I am looking for a slightly deeper (not much but just slightly) bass tone for this role and have sent an offer to another submitter... but please know that I am thankful for your submission and I can hear your experience shine through, even on such a short reading... you actually have a great voice for another character in this project, but unfortunately his lines have already been recorded... your time and effort were not wasted and I wish you the best on all future projects!