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David Techman for The guard who witnessed
Voice Actor
Code red dance floor, code red dance floor. Patron has punched a woman in the face. White male, grey suit, dark hair, mid twenties.
Not quite the emotion I'm looking for with this line. You sound bored. When you witness a man punching a woman in the face, there are plenty of normal emotions. Confusion, anger, fear, nervousness, even fun and excitement depending on the guard. But boredom? That breaks the immersion for me. Very hard to believe this is real.
You are absolutely right, I really didn't deliver this well. Thank you so much for commenting and for giving me feedback!
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