I do really like the pitch here for Halastair. I would say the emotions are very one-note through some lines and need some work? I would slow down the reads as my first suggestion. Line one should be almost quiet/ breathy and very torn because he's been away for months, and this is the first time he's been with his wife since he left. Line 2 also needs to be just ever so slightly quieter and there should be a slight hint of uneasiness to it. (NOTE for auditionees for Halastair: It is an implied intimate scene between him and Alma.) Line 3 was a bit better in terms of matching the emotional beat to the prompt. (Sorry for writing an essay.) Really, there is a LOT of potential with some direction on line reads!
Hey I just saw your comment and I appreciate the kind words and help , i can definitely send in another audition taking into consideration the direction you gave me , unless you wanted to try directing the scene like you said in your comment , either or is perfectly fine with me , I hope to hear back from you!!
