Skyrim Romance: Forbidden Love
mippa for Robin
Before the sparrow came along there was the robin. The chirpy assassin with a weakness for food. Her innocent manner often catches everyone by surprise when she comes out with the dirtiest innuendos, and she loves it. She was raised alongside Cael as his sister but as time went on their roles pushed apart the honourable Chieftain and the innocent but deadly shadow behind everybodys backs. If you try to change her family, breathe your last breath.
(After sneaking up on Cael) I'm just too good these days, little brother. So you're getting into the stage of bringing girls home now?!
*laughs* Hi. Now you, youre the Dragonborn. Youre the eater of worlds and- wait, isnt that the bad guy, al-doo-een? I always got bored before the important bits of Caels books. Youre the hero anyway and youre very lucky Cael thinks so much of you. His sparrow. Weird fascination with birds, that one
(Being asked why she doesnt like Cael) What?! He's like my little brother! Well I think he is, we were born a week apart and we lost track of which is which... He may have some weird obsessions, you for example, but that boy is our leader and I love him. Hurt him and you feel my daggers first.
Hey! Do you think you could audition with a voice that's a middle ground between this and your Eshne audition? The perkiness and enthusiasm is good but the pitch is too high and girly. Also the emphasis on the first line is meant to be on "NOW?!" Rather than "girls". The al-doo-een in the second line is meant to be elaborated on each syllable as if Robin is trying how on earth to pronounce it. With the third line keep it clear and enunciated. The last sentence is a deadly threat from a girl who's usually very cheeky, not meant to be rushed. See if you can do a line or two in a more threatening rasp. Since Robin can go from perky to murderous at the drop of a hat, it'd be good to hear how well you can transition between them in a single line. All if you're still interested in the role. Thank you!
All excellent feedback! I will shoot a re-take in a bit!
I meant "as if she's trying to remember how on earth to pronounce it." CCC needs an edit comment button! Sorry it's taken a month but with ear problems going on I couldn't hear anyone well enough to judge anything. I'll go and extend the deadline so you can still submit later :)
Aww that's the worst! No worries, I'll try to get to it today while it's fresh on my mind.