Hello, What I can say about this is that there are time where you did puff a bit on the mic, the air from your mouth can be tough enough to hit the mic during recording so be aware of you head placement, and be sure to keep your face a couple of inches or so away from the mic so the air from your breath don't hit the mic. And If t\you haven't acted in years, thats understandable. You manage to say the words clearly and there are understandable. But you certainly need to up the "Acting" when it comes to Voice Acting. Remember to use the information given about characters and keep track of how a character is. And if getting into the mood or moment is a challenge, try and imagine yourself as the characters. Or when reading the lines in your head, read out the lines at the very least several time out loud and in your head. Knowing how you sound and trying out different delivery to each line can help give you an idea of how to "Act" with your voice. Overall, you can read out the lines well, but certainly practice the lines as a character beforehand. Hope this was helpful.