Project: Blacklist
ZaKattacker for Clerence "Razor" Callahan
In-game Bio:
Razor rocketed to the top of the blacklist using your ride. Now he's holding it down and rolling the streets like he owns them. He'll do anything he can to give himself an edge. That includes messin' with your head. Remember, you can't trust anything he says.
Razor is the classic Wifebeater (if he had one) that somehow managed to manipulate the players Car so he could take it after the Race. A cheater, a coward, severe aggression problems, a summary of good traits you could find in a person. Razor is skinny, but definitely works out. He should have a voice that speaks of this constantly held back aggression he takes with him every step. Much like Bull and Ronnie he has a voice in the original Game, but I didn't want to skim on them due to the Nature of this Project.
If you can, try to get somewhat close to his OG Voice (but dont copy, just TRY to see what made it work. :D)
OG Voice:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Res-ZtxVxBM&t=163s
[Aggressive, annoyed]Okay, listen well and listen close, motherfucker, I don’t know how you did it, and I don’t care.
[Bragging, almost mocking] Remember your Car? Ohohoho, its a damn good Ride, but you are NOTHING without it. NOTHING.
[Aggressive, announcing the race on call]This is doomsday, Punk, I'll make sure the whole fucking town knows who took two entire Racecars from you when this is done!
Hey there, hi! Thank you so much for your Audition!So first off, I get the Energy and I am DEFINITELY not against it, but I feel like your voicetype doesn't really "match" with Razors Appearance. I will fully admit I might be biased since he has an original Voice - freshly updated that in the role tab, so check it out if you want! - but other than that, Razor's aggression is much more under the surface than openly on display. He should sound like he's constantly boiling and hardly keeping it under control.:DAlso ty for the blooper lol.
Ah, fair enough! Yeah, getting more of a look at him in the video you linked, I don't disagree, the depth doesn't quite work for him, and I can see what you mean about the aggression being just barely held back. I can give it another shot with those factors in mind, if y'all would like.