New World Adventures EMERGENCY RECAST!
SeanLeon for Kevar
This is a submission, not an audition. If I like your lines, you will be in the book, and you'll get a copy of the book delivered to an address of your choosing. No further recording required.
Full context:
“I could show ya’ how ta wield it,” said the man holding a dagger to Gwenevere’s throat.
“Ya’ surrounded!” said Kevar, another fireball forming above his hand. “Give the girl or ya’ all die!”
Extra comments:
Kevar is cocky. He likes his job, and the thought of things not going exactly his way doesn't even occur to him. I know his lines don't sound that funny, but he still thinks he is. To really get in the zone for this role, think of the most fun and joyful day you've ever had at the expense of someone you've truly hated. That's the frame of mind you need to be in to play as Kevar.
Common error:
Tenfold is said "TENfold" not "tenFOLD". The "ten" is the important part, because it's different than being paid "ninefold" or "elevenfold". The folding bit isn't the important bit of tenfold.
“I could show ya’ how ta wield it,”
“She ain’t worth it matey. Run a long and tell ’em that Kevar is takin’ care of ‘er now. I know how much you was paid, but he’ll prolly pay us tenfold.”“Drop it dwarf! Or tell ya’ boss ya’ got ‘er killed!”"Huh!" (winded from being elbowed in the gut)
“Ya’ surrounded!” “Give the girl or ya’ all die!”
Just noticed an earlier comment you made on someone else's audition of the voice you originally cast, and noticed it was a lot gruffer and deeper than my first audition. Decided to record something that was a little closer to that too.
The voice is actually good, but the audio quality isn't. I can hear lots of things in there that are not your voice. Also, I opened up the file to check this is true, your microphone is set too sensitive. The volume of your voice was louder than its recording range. You should be able to adjust this in your settings menu. If you ever find yourself unable to drop the sensitivity of a mic, instead move your head further away from the mic when recording. NEVER say the line more quietly. How loud you are should be determined only by the line, the character, and the scene. Don't let anything else change that. You say it at the correct volume, and use technology to bring that to the workable volume.
Thanks, I'll be sure to keep this in mind going forward.