Nice job with projecting and having a nice volume going on! First, watch out for those T and D sounds. For Peter and jotting, you made the T's sound like D's instead of emphasizing the T sound, so keep an ear out for those when you listen back. But you did well most of the time with your articulation, so that's a good place to continue practicing and eventually getting to the point of making it sound very natural. It comes with practice as you continue your vo journey!There was some hesistance going on like you didn't know what you were talking about, so remember you can read over the script a few times and practice it before giving us your take vs having it be a compete cold read. Cold reads are hard sometimes! You also were going a bit fast, so slowing down not only will help give you more time to say the words, but it'll also help you with those tricky consonant sounds, flow, and allow you room to really play. And if there's a word you don't know how to pronounce, go ahead and google it! Keep up the good work!