The Princesses of Tomorrowland (The Disney Princesses as Magical Girls) - EXTENDED
Ashley Desiree for MULAN
Originally from the film Mulan - Initially, Mulan is a mysterious vigilante the police dub "The Black Ninja" due to her covering herself in all black. She fights The Princesses, but later finds herself working with them in an attempt to return to her home. She is a soldier, lethal with a sword, unafraid, and will do whatever if necessary to get home. Her voice can sound like her movie counterpart.
- english
- american
- animation
- female young adult
(In disguise while fighting) "Your swordplay needs work! Follow my lead - and you might survive!
(Addressing the city square with commanding authority) "People! The only criminal on this stage is Judge Frollo and his wicked Queen! Tell me people, what do you all fear more? A common thief trying to survive or this so-called purveyor of justice demanding bribes from your hard earned pay for 'Protection'? Where I come from, we soldiers fought against people like these, one from every household! And you can too!"
(Explaining a Shrine statue) "Well that Dragon is actually an ancient guardian. I had one myself in China who protected me - until he tried to sabotage my marriage, but that’s another - less interesting story."
Good read - I like the energy and personable approach.
My direction notes would be more stoic, almost in a kind of deadpan matter-of-fact delivery (maybe with more volume for the second line since she's addressing a crowd). Mulan being a trained soldier who's been beaten down and had to fight for survival in this world, she's kinda got a "Let's get to the point" sort of vibe.
You got it! thank you for the feedback and direction :) I shall upload a retake in a form of another submission.