{Castaways} Fire Emblem: Fates Recasting
logicallyanime for Siegbert (Temporary)
Note: This role will be relieved from you if the original VA comes back. Keep this in mind when auditioning.
My weapon is ready. Now I need only strengthen my resolve.
I'll do my best to help everyone!
I'm still full of shortcomings, but someday, I promise I'll be a man who deserves your company. I can do anything if it's for you, my love.
I know the last few bits of words sounded bad. If you'd like I can reupload a better sounding last part.
For this particular take, I think the voice is lacking in determination, He has a similar tone to your Ignatius who is supposed to be a nervous character while Siegbert is a determined prince in the making. For the first like the pause between "ready" and "now" would be shorter. Your final take on the second lined was pretty good. It had the determination that was missing in the first line. The last line again has a problem with pacing. The pause between "you" and "my love" should transition a lot smoother. You seem to emote softer emotion better compared to more upbeat emotions. If you need help, try listening to all of the references, not just for the characters you auditioned for and take note on how they say there lines, what words they put emphasis on, how intense they are saying certain lines etc. When you are doing VA and want to improve, it's sometimes best to shadow other actors.