The voice is pretty good, it's warm and youthful and captures the type of character I envisioned him as, although it does tend to descend from Aussie to cockney at times, if you'd forgive me for saying 😅
Although you did up the tempo a little too much and the second line kind of lacks the Aussie like aggression needed for the well meaning but impulsive character he is
If you wish to resubmit and or try for another character, that is completely welcome
for sure, i got you. My bad i’m mexican asian with the regular voice of kratos so a little error slipped by, can fix it up tomorrow!