Thank you so much for your submission as Commandant! I can see you have a range between your two takes with your first takes being a little more controlled and the second take being more powerful in your voice. However, I do feel like the first takes wound up rather flat in its direction whereas the second takes were too urgent. This is less of a problem for the first line, but the second and third line, where the second line should convey more of the caring personality of the Commandant, where you're comforting a friend and assuring them and the third being an order as a leader, so I wanted a bit more power, and while you did have power in your second take, it also sounded more like panic or warning someone instead of commanding/ordering someone.

As per my last update, because you did submit an audition prior to the deadline, you are now welcome to resubmit if you are still interested up until November 9th. After that, I will be finalizing casting, but please let me know if you are interested at all in resubmitting so I can keep you in mind before I go ahead and begin casting for Commandant. Wishing you the best of luck!