Operation: PGR Fandub Project
SpencerVA for Lee
The straight man and tech guy of the Gray Raven squad. He’s the most logical of the three in the Gray Raven, but don’t mistake it as him being cold; he’s a lot more caring than he lets on and it shows a lot when it comes to people he cares about, especially his younger brother Murray.
Midrange young adult male. Usually aloof/flat if not mildly snarky and lecturing, but capable of softening up in sincere moments. For voice reference, I’m looking more for something similar to his ENG performance.
Voice Reference:
- english
- male young adult
(lecturing/scolding) Yes, you did. But for this, you’ve been heavily wounded, our most important Commandant nearly died, and not only so, even Liv’s lost her combat capabilities.
(lecturing/caring) Don’t push yourself. Extended mind linking will cause you harm. How many times do I have to tell you?
(matter of fact) Leading the team? I’m more than qualified.
It was awesome to see you resubmit alongside giving your take on Commandant!
I can see that your authoritative voice is really good and holds a lot of power and the way you hold back on that power when you get to the second line where it's warmer and friendlier was a good choice for this! I also caught the sound of a little laugh when you start the "I don't need a reason for that" in your second take which was neat to catch!
Something that I really liked about your Chrome resubmission was that you added sighs with your last lines! This gave more of an impact with how the lines get delivered. And I also really love that it sounds like between the resubmission and the original, you put in a little more of that emotion - that pleading - with the second lines so that was also very neat.
I think I was the most impressed with how you did your Lee retakes because I loved how much cockier and slightly sassy you made him - like waaaay way more attitude in this one, especially in that first line and the third line (the third line was good because you added that confident laugh). I do feel that the pacing for the second line was a little odd with the pause where it was, but aside from that, very solid performance!
It's cool to see though how quickly you incorporated both the feedback while also deviating a bit from the script/making the script your own because I can tell with these you were a little more playful and loosened up with your performance, so that was awesome to see and I hope you're also proud of yourself for that!
While casting won't be done until after Monday, I do hope we get a chance to work together whether that is in this project or in the future. Wishing you the best of luck with this and future endeavors!
You have some of the best feedback I've seen thus far!
Wanted to test myself against with the suggestions you have made, and was extremely happy with how my resubmissions came out. It definitely makes me a little prouder to see the feed back you've provided reinforce that as well.
I definitely had more fun with these, whereas the first ones I have to agree I was a little too... "tense" I think is the best way to put it. Thank you for your feedback, and I'm excited to see what you bring with this project even if I'm not selected. Best of luck in this project, and hopefully the many more to come in the future!