Operation: PGR Fandub Project
DistortedSpire for Bianca
The leader of the Purifying Force of Babylonia Task Force, in charge of handling deserters and Corrupted units from Babylonia. She can be very stern but hides a very pious and caring character beneath, always willing to listen to other’s opinions before making a decision.
Controlled mid-deep female voice. Think of a lawful good character, speaks polite/proper, but try to put in a hint of warmth within her words. Open to interpretation for voice.
- english
- female adult
- female young adult
(understanding) I know, that’s why I’m not fully giving him the pass…..But as a leader, I know I’d do the same thing as Chrome.
(thoughtful, almost spiteful) God said to love people and your enemies. If I can’t love the enemies because of the people I love…
(determined) Even if our prayers are unheard, and salvation never comes, I do not intend to merely sit and wait—
Nicely done with your resubmissions! Both of these were big improvements from your initial takes with them, and I'm so glad you took the opportunity to improve further on your work.
This time for your Bianca it felt more warmer and personal as a take, where I can feel more of that quite spitefulness coming in through your first take of the second line. And I also found that the first take of the first line was a lot warmer where it felt like you really do feel for Chrome in this line, so these were well done!
And it was awesome to hear you be even more playful for your Vera! The taunting came out way more with your takes of the first lines so awesome job with bringing that in. Also I really enjoyed how you did the angrier line for her.
There's just a few general things I want you to also keep mind of with future auditions as well that I didn't pick up until this time around, but even if the directions do not ask you to pause or laugh or sigh, it's not a bad idea to add those in when you think it's right to really sell your performance and bring more life into it. I think in your first audition for Vera, I was very fond of the way you threw in a chuckle between the words for the "Still alive?" line, and I wanted to highlight that was a really good feature for you to bring in for your audition.
But aside from that, you did a good job with incorporating my feedback and it was really awesome to see, especially since you did mention that you're only just starting as a voice actor! While casting won't be done for another week, I really am looking forward to seeing your growth as a voice actor. Keep working and fine tuning those skills, and I'm sure you're going to do amazing, and I hope we get a chance to work together whether it's on this project or in a future one!
Ahh I’m so glad I was able to improve a bit this time! Thank you so much for your feedback again, I also really like how you mention adding in a laugh, sigh, etc., It’s a really good piece of advice! It kinda makes me think to June Yoon’s Swiss Cheese Analogy on how he mentions reading a line on how you naturally would vs just reading it, if that makes sense haha
I wasn't aware of the Swiss Cheese Analogy! I'm going to have to look into that later, but the general idea is something I'm aware of though with reading a line the way you would say it vs. just reading it, and it is a good strategy with deliveries. Thanks for letting me know about that and thanks again !