Operation: PGR Fandub Project
Daniel for Nozzle
One of the first machines that the Gray Raven face as an enemy. Originally created to help his creator draw more art, he now wanders the world leaving graffiti everywhere in hopes to spread his message everywhere. His message? To follow what is known as “The Sagemachina”.
Very giggly as he speaks as he’s very excited to showcase his messages.
- english
- male adult
- male young adult
- male teen
(in awe) I feel a deep…curiosity for the world from the notes…
(excited) Good idea….Good idea…. heheheh
(sad) No one understands me….No one understands my creative works….
Thank you so much for your auditions for Nozzle and Gabriel! These were really cool to hear and it was especially fun to hear your more robotic impressions for each of the characters, given, well...they are robots lol
Your Nozzle was very very fun to listen to! You did a good job in incorporating more of the giggling throughout all your lines as I would have wanted for Nozzle's character, and especially the excited line where you rushed your lines to show more excitement as you think more about your plans. I do feel that I would have wanted the sadder line to be a little sadder, but having that quiet voice helps a lot with contrasting to the louder and giggly lines that you have provided so this was an overall solid performance! Nice job!
I felt that your voice however for Gabriel was a little too high and a little too soft for what I was looking for for Gabriel. I also found that the pacing for the line -- in particular for the first line's first take -- to be a little weird. While yes he is a robot, he does actually speak more fluently like a human, so there is no need to make pauses for the line.
Still, I do appreciate your takes on both of these characters! You're more than welcome to resubmit for these characters if you're interested at all, but otherwise, thank you so much for your time and I hope to work with you soon!
Thank you so much for your feedback, I can definitely try to improve the takes.
I just want ask what would you like me to add sadness. Do you want me to try crying or how would you want me to reflect the sadness. If you could give me some suggestions I'd love to adjust it.
Thanks for the suggestions I will definitely try adjusting the auditions.
I appreciate you asking ! I apologize I didn't clarify. It must have flew over my head while writing your feedback.
If possible, what I'm going for with the sadder line is think of the slightly overdramatic teenager who thinks no one understands them. That level of slight whininess and hurt like you're on the brink of tears, but not so much full on crying, is what I was hoping for with this line. If you're able to play around with that direction, I'd love to see you give it a shot!