Thank you so much for your audition for Liv! I really enjoyed your all the adlibbing you did during such as the stutter you put into your first line, the sigh in the second line, and how you switched the pace for the third line when you say "rising rapidly." You did a good job with taking the directions and placing into your delivery, so your delivery was very much spot on!

The only thing I really have to say about your audition is that I feel it's missing the timidness that I would have wanted for Liv. She's a very soft spoken character and a little shy in personality. Even when she dotes, it sounds more worried than lecturing. For this, I would recommend maybe quieting your voice or having more hesitation (I think you nail this personality well in your second take of the first line.)

I also want to point out to be careful about reading lines properly. In the final line you say "he needs emergency buffers immediately" in your second take rather than "he needs emergency buffers, now!" which while I'm fine with it and I found that you did well by changing it, other projects and directors may not like that change.

That aside, taking into account all the things I said, I'd love to hear a second try with more of the shy aspect/timidness in your voice as Liv. If not, then thank you for your time and I hope we can talk soon!