Thank you so much for your audition for Nozzle! I was happy and appreciative to listen through your audition. I really like how you delivered the first line and the second line and you really convey the happiness and joy in Nozzle's character well and I really liked your laugh/giggle for Nozzle and it works well since Nozzle laughs quite a lot.

There's a couple of things I also hoped to see a little more of with the audition and if you're interested, you're more than welcome to resubmit and I'll give it a listen using the directions, but it felt like the last line wasn't very sad in its direction. It still felt like you had a smile on your face while delivering the line and the emotion between this line next to the second line was no different. Facial expression and even body movement plays a lot into how you deliver the line. Sometimes you'll need to take a moment between the lines to recover and put yourself in the right mindset, asking yourself "Why is the line being said?" "How would I feel saying this line?" And then taking that into account to deliver the right performance.

For similar reasons, I also felt like your second line could use a little more excitement. Think of a child that's FINALLY getting on that amusement park ride you've been waiting so long for. That joyful laugh and excitement in anticipation. Your delivery already is good enough, it's just matters of doing a tad bit more to make it perfect. Same with first line where I feel like it could sound a little more thoughtful -- think, wise sage in thought.

Beside that, this was really nice to hear and I really enjoyed your performance. So again, if you're interested I'd love to hear you tackle the audition again with all that I said, but otherwise, thank you so much for your time!