Thanks so much for your interest in the project and for your audition as Commandant! It's really neat to see your range from your lower pitch versus your higher pitch that you do in the second takes of each. You did a good job with both the directions between the first line and third line, giving a more authoritative and powerful figure for the Commandant.

One thing that did fall short was the warm/sincere line. I felt that the urgency for the first line carried into the second line which made it sound more worried than reassuring and warm like I had hoped for. Feel free to take a breath and do what you need to do in order to get yourself into the scene. Some tricks for that is doing some adlib before -- saying certain things beforehand that'll help provide a warmer performance or even laughing or sighing in the middle of the line -- whatever you think would help with making that delivery even better.

If you'd like you're welcome to resubmit an audition for Commandant all things that I wrote, but otherwise, I look forward to working with you in the future!