I am honestly kinda surprised how everyone sees him with this kinda really high-ish voice haha. Well, that being said, there is not much to "criticize" about this Audition. Your Production quality is solid, the Delivery is quite fine, but it kinda doesn't hit the right notes. One thing I especially notice is that the "You know?" feels a little overarticulated. It should be more akin to y'know? Listening back multiple times, I think the biggest thing is that you try to build too much into the clear enounciation of every word, rather than focusing on the "emotion". While clarity of course is extremely important, Its not making the entire thing work by itself. :) Thank you so much for your Audition!